I've got a story I'd like to make intro a short movie once in the future, but apparently, it's a far too large task for our final project this year, therefore I thought I could try to shorten it, but that destroys the story, so now I've finally found a way to  do a short version: I could make a preview/trailer of/for it :3
It's mostly just cuts from the entire story, but here you go:

Teltra 3.2 - What could happen inside a freezer box?
First we see the neighbourhood/the house, the camera zooms in on the basement window, flying through it, just as Jonas sits down in the freezer box, cut to view from within the freezer box when the Neighbour closes the lid, instant blackness as the lid is closed, suddenly we see Jonas sitting in the middle of a purple grass field, pan/zoom out, we see that he's surrounded by parallell rows of twisted pastell trees. Cut to Jonas walking, cut to him being surrounded by creepy, zombie-like-walking mannequin shadows, cut to Jonas completely surrounded, then the mannequin-creatures part, and the Leader approaches, Jonas walks with the Leader and most of the mannequin-creatures disperse back between the twisted pastell trees, cut to the Leader pointing, and Jonas look down in a sort of floating pond, camera tilt over his shoulder, we see Jonas' family all frustrated, in double speed, Jonas looks up at the leader, anxious to get home (despair in his eyes/face), cut to the Leader and Jonas walking to the end of an edge/cliff (the other side of the grass field, as opposed to the floating pond)Jonas looks over the edge, camera til over his shoulder, there's nothing there (infinity), cut to Jonas running and jumping off the cliff.
Next cut to Jonas sitting on a chair in the bacement, grinning at his sister, and her smiling back.

It's a story about Jonas, a 15 year old boy, who ends up in his younger sister's fantazy world after he tried the teletranportation machine they made, Teltra 3.2. The world consists of purple, glowing grass and parallell rows of twisted pastell trees, and the only inhabitats are faceless, gray mannequin-creatures looking creatures that kind of resemble zombies when they move. The have a Leader, a mannequin-creature with a drawn-on face and that actually walks (as opposed to the other mannequin-creatures), and the only way to get back to Jonas' world is to Jump off the edge (cliff), but it only works if someone back in his world knows where he is, if not, he'd end up falling forever, but Jonas knows his sister created te world, and that she knows that's where he is, so he jumps. the next instance, he's back in the freezer box, and as he gets out, the aduld fall quiet and walks upp, out of the bacement, and Jonas sits down on a chair as he talks to his sister. 

Okay, I fail trying to shorten it :P

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